Suggest acronym change to BPM 201 for clarity in the future because there will be other Business Practice Manuals which you referenced in the last sentence of the first paragraph (page 3):
The Operations Program Timeline Business Practice Manual (BPM 201) outlines the high-level activities and their associated timing that occur for the period starting seven days prior to the Operating Day (OD) and ending on the OD during the Binding Season. Additional details for each activity, such as data submission requirements, interactions with the Program Interface Tool, details of the Sharing Calculation, and details of the calculation of Holdback Requirement, are addressed in other Business Practice Manuals.
The end of the Purpose sentence (page 3) seems to be missing words.
Purpose
To provide an overview of the WRAP Operations Programs activities that may impact business processes or front-office activities of current or potential Participants and expand on the Tariff activities and associated. (?)
Second paragraph under Multi-Day-Ahead Assessment (page 4) is missing words or delete “which” on this sentence:
Additionally, if the Multi-Day-Ahead Assessment indicates a potential for a large Sharing Event, the PO will notify Participants of the potential for insufficient holdback to meet the total deficit as calculated by the Sharing Calculation which. (?)
Regarding format:
Make sure heading/sub-heading formats are consistent throughout document.
Use consistent format when referring to times, e.g. 06:00 PPT, not 6:00 PPT.
Use consistent font throughout, including for graphics.
Regarding structure:
This BPM contains some vague language, be as specific as possible.
Use consistent writing style throughout all BPMs.
Regarding content:
Leverage wording used in Design Document and ensure that BPM and Design Document are aligned.
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